Improvements i think you should make is use a more wide range of shot distences and in some areas you can't read the bits in blue. Postives is the magzine is eye catching and also i feel it challenges conventions. From Deanne
i like your front cover and contents page and also your double page spread, they all link together well and the house style matches the target audience, the photographs are all really nice and well shot. i like the fact you have stuck to the conventions and it is very well done.
i really like your front page it eye catching but i think its a little bit crowded and that maybe a smaller font could be used. i really like your image its clear and well taken.
your contents page is good. i like how you have set it out. i also really like your image and the colours used. i also really like how your double page is set out and the use of colours. you can tell that all your pages are part of the same magazine. Jessie
I really like your front page, its really eye catching and draws you in, althought it does look a bit crowded. The image is clear and looks very professional. I love the contents page, its really well set out. I like how your magazine challenges the conventions :)
I like the use of font and you have clearly kept a house design which is all very warm with reds and oranges. I think the use of photography could be better and the girl could be more stylised, as she doesnt look particularly fashionable. I do like the overally layout of how the text and images have been incorporated. i think the 'Bieber' could be better thought of.
The house style is awesome, the photos and text intergrate really well, the colour schemes are really bright and elabrate, they fit in with the genre of the magazine really well. You can tell there all part of the same magazine, very conventional. No improvments in my opinion.
Improvements i think you should make is use a more wide range of shot distences and in some areas you can't read the bits in blue.
ReplyDeletePostives is the magzine is eye catching and also i feel it challenges conventions.
From Deanne
House-style is really good. Photographs are manipulated well and I really like the mast-head and slogan and the colours on the front cover.
ReplyDeleteThe blue text on the DPS is hard to read but the article is funny.
i like your front cover and contents page and also your double page spread, they all link together well and the house style matches the target audience, the photographs are all really nice and well shot. i like the fact you have stuck to the conventions and it is very well done.
ReplyDeletei really like your front page it eye catching but i think its a little bit crowded and that maybe a smaller font could be used. i really like your image its clear and well taken.
ReplyDeleteyour contents page is good. i like how you have set it out. i also really like your image and the colours used.
i also really like how your double page is set out and the use of colours.
you can tell that all your pages are part of the same magazine. Jessie
I really like your front page, its really eye catching and draws you in, althought it does look a bit crowded. The image is clear and looks very professional. I love the contents page, its really well set out. I like how your magazine challenges the conventions :)
ReplyDeleteI like the use of font and you have clearly kept a house design which is all very warm with reds and oranges. I think the use of photography could be better and the girl could be more stylised, as she doesnt look particularly fashionable. I do like the overally layout of how the text and images have been incorporated. i think the 'Bieber' could be better thought of.
ReplyDeleteThe house style is awesome, the photos and text intergrate really well, the colour schemes are really bright and elabrate, they fit in with the genre of the magazine really well. You can tell there all part of the same magazine, very conventional. No improvments in my opinion.
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